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elegy for the drunk

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spontaneity!
so sweetly you stumbled into my veins
slurring sanity
as i soaked
in your bourbon smile
Sorry for the multiple edits. I wasn't happy with the content of the poem, but I'm getting it very close to where I feel I want it. As always, suggestions and critiques are more than welcome.
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